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| 11-15-10 04:14pm - 5151 days | Original Post - #1 | |
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graymane (0)
Suspended  Posts: 1,411 Registered: Feb 20, '10 Location: Virginia |
Wanted; Needed; pleading for good Porn script writers. "Okay, places, everyone...action!; great, now roll it!" The scene: Woman walks into a bank. She has on a heavy overcoat, dark glasses, dressed as a man and wearing a wig. (this is our first clue the script writer also has "no clue." red flags would go up everywhere.) The only person working, or present in the bank, is a young, handsome teller. (Don't know how many banks the author's been in, but have you seen a one-man bank before?) The woman hands the young man a note. It say's "I have a gun and I'll kill you if you create any attention." (Since there's no one else in the bank, it occurred to me that might've been a tad irrelevant). But it'll fly. keep'em rolling. The woman rips open her coat, revealing a short skirt, up over the cheeks of her ass. (somewhat odd, I guess. But Bank-robbers do use all kinds of ploys to rob banks.) She then produces a gun (handling it with the finesse of a chimpanzee.) After the Woman's dialogue tapered down from commands to chit-chat, the two suddenly found themselves volcanically hot for each other's bodies and commenced to go through the obligatory three ( BJ, sex front and rear, and lastly the facial.) Bank sex...geeez, what a brilliant way to get more business. Must'a been a kind'a unpopular location, because nobody came into the bank throughout that whole sexual escapade. Now, I have to ask: "Is this scenario ever remotely going to happen at a bank? I'd say production is spittin' out movies faster than writers can finger the keys. So, C'mon porn-people, Churn out some good scrips, especially those that'll inject A little more orginality and realism, I know I'll have my critics who'll say "well damed, graymane...this is just fantasy, what'da'ya expect?" I want some measure of believability, that's all. I'm afraid, though, that might be too much to ask? BTW, might I use this moment to appeal to the industry to film stuff with a little more missionary positions, PLEASE! Edited on Nov 15, 2010, 08:49pm | |
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| 11-15-10 09:40pm - 5151 days | #2 | |
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hodayathink (0)
Active User Posts: 312 Registered: Mar 27, '09 Location: Illinois |
Unfortunately, the consumer en masse has proven time and time again that they really don't care about the quality or believability of a porn script. So why put forth the effort (and the money)? To use your example, why pay people to stand around as extras in that scene? | |
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| 11-17-10 05:51am - 5149 days | #3 | |
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Ed2009 (0)
Suspended Webmaster  Posts: 509 Registered: Sep 12, '09 Location: Wales, UK |
A lot of my customers do seem to care very much about the realism and believability of the scenarios, but it is very difficult to do scenes on location in a realistic way. Of course with consumers constantly wanting to see something different and new there are bound to be some attempts at stuff which should just have been avoided in the first place. The question is: If you can't do it believably, should you do it at all? I would say no, but I've heard a lot of people who disagree with me. Webmaster of StripGameCentral and A Measure of Curiosity. | |
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| 11-17-10 10:37pm - 5149 days | #4 | |
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graymane (0)
Suspended Posts: 1,411 Registered: Feb 20, '10 Location: Virginia |
Thanks, Ed. Quoting an' old saying:..."a picture is worth a thousand words." Your comment is the best picture to come down the pike. | |
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| 11-18-10 07:22pm - 5148 days | #6 | |
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pat362 (0)
Active User  Posts: 3,575 Registered: Jan 23, '07 Location: canada |
I agree that a good script is important. The problem that I see is that there aren't any good porn actors to play the parts. I'm one of those guys that wants scenario porn and I'm not looking for Shakespear. I can overlook quite a lot before the scene is completelu ruined but how often do I see a performer playing a part but her eyes keep looking off camera or she's chewing gum, of she's reading her lines like their were the instrution of a TV dinner. Long live the Brown Coats. | |
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